Tuesday, 13 September 2011

Using different connectives to finish a sentence...

Jessie was great at running...

... however she stumbled over the finish line.

... although she eats a lot of scrumptious fast food.

... however she wasn't as good as all the boys.

... although sometimes she came 10th.

... eventhough everyone lowered her confidence

... although her hair was flying everywhere in the race as she galloped to the finish line.

... but she had to suffer Mr Hazelgrove's rubbishness more than before.

... despite the fact that there was nearly a storm coming

... also the standing long jump.

Adam was star of the day...

... however, the next day, he went to time out twice.

... eventhough he forgot to sit on the star cushion.

... eventhough he beat up 6 year 3s in a temper after being bullied.

... despite sneakily running in the crowded corridor badly singing 'I am the one and only'.

... also he got a star cushion.

... despite being clueless in literacy when asked to read a page of the best-selling book 'Boy'.

... as well as winning cross country.

... despite the fact that he was scoffing chocolate in the playground and didn't share it with Miss Norris.

... however he only dreamt it.

1 comment:

  1. i love the bit where it said about the clueless one because it was mine but as for the rest of the class they did absolutely amazingly brilliant

    from cantarose

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