Thursday, 26 April 2012

my amazing sentence



My amazing sentence

Suddenly the vast German shepherd, ty ferociously barked as john, the mailman slowly struggled by with a sack of parcels, post cards and letters then ty bit john "OWCH." He shrieked in pain his face went bright red then green then purple!! "HELP." He was screaming while blood was flooding out of his excruciating wound.
By Adam 6n  
Posted by Miss G Norris at 20:33

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 May 2012 at 13:46

    That is a grest sentance!

    alice

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  2. Anonymous11 May 2012 at 13:47

    Amazzing work but its not a scentance. I would call it my amazzing scentance's.
    Victoria

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